that was good...keep up the great work!! <3 rachael

i love it it is full of what most of us out there are going threw!! if you know what i mean!! awesome!! love mattie

thats a great poem it really expresses your feeling and i have a reason "your parents love you and no one would want to hurt their parents that bad!"

Good poem, it really expresses raw emotion. It has a certain mood thats more than just depressing, something I can't really word right, but whatever it is it's well flowed. Thanks for showing me I can connect to someone..