I hope you can find the women who will be everything you need, the kind that knows how to be in a realationship :D.

This poem needs a few changes. I know what your trying to say but the wording is not right. As it is I give it a 3

I liked this poem, throughout it there is a sense of frustration and a little bit of defensivness... As if you don't deserve the treatment. Well, whatever...well done!

Oh Jeff you're really struggling with your unhappiness aren't you? I hope you will meet the girl that you long for! Your poems have a sadness when it comes to matters of the heart! You let out your true feelings and that's a good thing! ~Brooke~

Hi....
I really thought that you did well with this poem. There is truth to what you say... The opposite sex can make us feel so many things, go through so much... Just always remain searching for the one that would make your heart at last feel at ease. God Bless.

Libby

I truly hope you find that love of your life and I hope she will be loving and kind, someone you truly long for. Bless you and your heart my friend.... hugs, love, Ann