Comments : Life

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow I loved it. but sometimes the rhyming seemed forced. Keep up the good work.

    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by ReBecca

    Keep your head up. you can only be a victim if you CHOOSE to be a victim. be a survivor instead and you'll want more for yourself, and the people around you who hurt you will not have the power to so anymore...good write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sakura Kimiko

    Aw, ya see? I like these much much better. 5/5!!! Lol, Sakura