*Laughs* how completely psychotic! This was very fun to read. You have an admirable talent for the believable ;)

Ok I want one ticket to the funny farm...Lol... this was great.

wow thats really good

Excellent, sounds like schizophrenia to me. 5!

i really like this poem...it's really good. keep up the good writing.

WOW.. I LOVED THIS POEM ITS EFFING AWSOME!! I really enjoyed reading it..

Great poem. lovein it. New here so please comment my work. yours is so great.

This poem is soooooooooo spooky and awesome

wow...amazing!!!! so dark and twisted. absolutely amazing! keep it up.
-xXx-

Very emotional. I could picture how you described every detail. Job well done!

I really like that I have a sister that says stuff like that

freaky... i loveed it!

magnificent!! i love it... beautiful

it was meat i dont think i herd things like that good job i gave u a 5

this poem is kick ass man, keep it up!...love always ~erin~

Your wordplay has great effect. The imagery you create is tangible. A work of art. I am glad to have had the pleasure of reading this.
Most certainly a 5.
Peace, love and empathy.

I love your poem, your right it was some what disturbing ..but i think it was amazing.:D

this poem was amazing i loved it!
xoxo
mandi

hey this was great

omg wow..i relle liked it, n i didnt find it disturbing..is it true?