Save me from my soul

by FlowerThatDied   Jul 11, 2005


I wish you would find me,
Lost in these woods,
Save me from my soul,
But instead I wait for you to notice,
By this time my hearts gone cold,

Tell me you love me,
Thats all I need,
While I sit at my future grave and weep,
Because your love makes me so week,
I cannot find the love I crave,

Because I've been changing,
Into someone I don't like,
All I want is a kiss,
One that tells me you love me,
One that tells me you give a damn,

I just want to be so far away,
Someone I can sit alone,
Think, what do I do to make you see,
What your ignorance has done to me,

But you won't,
And yet I love you,
Is this true love,
Is it a defect in the imagination,
Am I just wanting,
Someone please tell me.

~*~Please help by r/c with either advice or comments on the poem~*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Amazing write.. I can defiantly relate a lot to it.. 5/5 none to less.. Keep it up and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Lily

    Oh my god that was deep and beautiful you wrote the feelings and reflected this poem from my heart i love it! i gave you a 5
    love cannot be helped you love someone because you love them don't let him go.