ok...i'm leaving you a comment like i promised. First...over all i thought the poem was good. you did a good job expressing your emotions...now all u need to do is focus on the rymes and the flow of the poem...just a thought...i still liked it though

Yes i see what you mean, Thanx though for the help, now i know what i could work on

that was so cute!! i like the way u could make me like picture it. i love swinging and just like, sit there and think about certain people. i really loved it.

This is a beautiful poem...i absolutely adore it lol...

~Sandra~