aw hunny that is really sad. i hope its not true, if so any guy who leaves you for another girl isnt worth your tears! please comment on my poem The Tale Of Tears, that would mean heaps to me!
Well done, stay strong
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good poem. you wrote it well...nice emotion!

Don't let anyone wreck you like that! That's disturbing to read! Hold your head up high and tell him to go on! :)

Very well written. It flowed very well and was very emotional and heart felt.

The only suggestion I would make is to choose a title. It sounds like you have two. I think you should choose either "Without you in my life" or Living is not worthwhile" Both suite the poem but I didn't think it was necessary to have both. :)

Beautiful write! 5/5

aww, thats sad... but true... i know what ya mean about not wanting to live without "someone" in your life....
Keep writing...
~Meg

thanks guys! your comments mean the world to me! ill be sure to return the favor..and I will change my title! I was still trying to decide which one to use..but thanks for the suggestion!

has a lovely flow.... i really like it !

In a way this seems like something I would write about. Once again, a great poem. Flowed beautifuly and it had a lot of talent in it. Great Poem, 5/5

aw this is so beautifully written and so sweet!! great job 5/5

Very well writen. 5/5