Ehh it may not have been one of your best but none the less it was pretty good. Keep writing

that is such a good poem well done!! and thanks for commenting on mine! i appreciate it!

It was a strong poem, short yet emotional and enjoyable, brought a tear to my eye, so sorry that you feel so low at the moment, if theres anything I can do, hope things get better, good write

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It may not be one of your best but it's still not bad.

This line to me didn't make sense "didn't stay in on earth that long" The first stanza I wouldn't use the word cause I think it takes away from the poem. This part I really liked "this heart is so fragile and weak
and it is hurting inside of ME...." I hope you wanted honesty because I try to be honest and helpful if I can. Remember not everyone has the same opinions. I do agree this wasn't your best after just reading your other two that were amazing. Take Care! Brooke~

its actually really great.. usually i dont like short poems.. but this one has enough description and emotion in it that makes me like it! hope this isnt true!!! i know how that is... so if you ever need to talk im me on aim... CuteLovePancake!
keep em coming
amanda

it was a good poem!!! i sorry to hear that you were so down...i like your poems, they're all great!!! you're a great poet!!!

Aww I think this poem is sad.. it's short but it's really good so it dosen't need to be longer. nice choice of words
well done

awww, sweetie this is so sad. even though this was a short poem i really enjoyed it, it got strait to the point, beautiful darling.
5/5 def. <33
Always,
-xoxo-
Kit

If this isn't your best, your best must be incredible because this was a great poem. Job well done.

I thought this was really good...another 5/5!

i agree with every word of ur poem and i definitly can relate to it 100%...excellent

As good and well written as the other poems I've read by you, you're a good poet:)

Best wishes,
Patrik