Wow...that was so heart felt and sweet! I really enjoyed reading it!!

"because once you've hit rock bottom...
The only way you can go is up"
These were my favorite lines because they show enthusiasm about something not so good.

"Every light I saw,
was just an illusion"
These lines caught my eyes as well. Very creative. Seeing something that may be good but finding out it's nothing or it is just something bad. I love how you put it so simple with such an impact.

I don't particularly like all the commas and such in poetry but everyone does it. What ever floats your boat. I just think they can take away from the flow which in turn takes away from the poem.

Excellent write though. I loved it! :)

I loved the ending! Another amazing write! I can't seem to write love poems you do it quite well! ~Brooke~

Hey awesome poem. I loved the rhyme scheme.. it sounded really great. I think the ending is really good too! 5/5! Keep it up.

omg! i love the ending! it fit in perfect with the whole poem...wonderful job! 5/5

That's awesome.. your ryhmes are amazing. The passion and emotion made this a really amazing poem. I like it :)

omgosh that was awesome!! i can soo relate to that poem!! that how my friend feels about me!!!!!! my begining to feel that way about him too!!!! 5/5