Comments : Hearts Masquerade

  • 14 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Hello Everyone. For all of you people who love the story behind the poem, here it is. This is who I feel about a girl I like who, by a series of unfortunate events (lol), is no longer my girlfriend. She really meant alot to me (she still does) and I just wanted her to know that even though we're not together I'm glad she's happy. Thanks in advance for all who vote/comment.

  • 14 years ago

    by Forever29

    How about, Masquerade? Really a great poem! Hope to read more of yours..Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow this is GREAT!!!! Although, I suck at thinking of titles, so I can't help ya there. Me sorry! Anyway, great job with this poem!! Keep em coming. I'm sorry about that girl... I know how you feel, trust me.

    Amy

  • 14 years ago

    by undying blusher

    You care for her happiness...that's true friendship if not more...the poem is great...the rhyming and all made it flow nicely...hm...title....how about "Your happiness" or "Masked" (okay, i'm not very good at titles either)

    xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by None

    "A heart without love"
    sound good?

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashli

    lol...this is good...i like coming up with weird names to poems. ok here goes...how bout "Cries of A Broken Heart", "Agonizing Happiness" or! "Mask of a Hurting Soul"
    hope this helps...great poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I like "Mask of a Hurting Soul" from Ashli. I'm no good at making up titles but that ones pretty good. nice poem btw:)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I would say "Hearts Masquerade" because masquerade is a party were you wear a mask but also it would be masking your heart because of your love for her, but her happiness is more important then her loving you so you are willing to mask your hearts true feelings to see her happiness. it's a great poem! it has a good deep feeling that you love someone so much that you just want them to be happy even if it means that you may be lonely.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 14 years ago

    by writer girl

    Mask of a Hurting Soul is a great title. i like your poetry. thanks for commenting on mine.
    5/5

    -kk-

  • 14 years ago

    by Willie

    WOW I REALLY LIKED UR POEM, CHECK SOME OF MINE OF

  • 14 years ago

    by *NIkkI lUvZ dARryL* 4 LyF

    hurtful soul

  • 14 years ago

    by Marissa Methanphetamine

    "shattered mask" or "behind the mask lies a shattered heart"... "the mask that hides my rejection" "mask of rejection" "her laughing soul hides my broken soul" hey they aint good but i thought id help..... srry about ur g/f... i alomost lost mine.... i guess im lucky huh? btw 5/5 i gave u! uh IM me sometime at MzLonley2005
    [-*_Marissa_*-]

  • 14 years ago

    by danielle

    i think ur poem is true its how you feel but sometimes its hard to let go, like they say" the hardest part is leting go" but what they dont say is it only makes it easier to move on well keep writing the great poems

  • 14 years ago

    by lauren.

    that is such a great poem. I am impressed =D! but i couldnt even think of a good title. sorry =\

  • great job.i know how you feel. awesome poem. keep on writing good poems.. ;).. good job.
    Crystal

  • 14 years ago

    by TaTtErEdXhEaRt

    sounds like love to me.. i enjoyed this..very selfless..awesome...5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5! =)