Hello Everyone. For all of you people who love the story behind the poem, here it is. This is who I feel about a girl I like who, by a series of unfortunate events (lol), is no longer my girlfriend. She really meant alot to me (she still does) and I just wanted her to know that even though we're not together I'm glad she's happy. Thanks in advance for all who vote/comment.
Wow this is GREAT!!!! Although, I suck at thinking of titles, so I can't help ya there. Me sorry! Anyway, great job with this poem!! Keep em coming. I'm sorry about that girl... I know how you feel, trust me.
You care for her happiness...that's true friendship if not more...the poem is great...the rhyming and all made it flow nicely...hm...title....how about "Your happiness" or "Masked" (okay, i'm not very good at titles either)
I would say "Hearts Masquerade" because masquerade is a party were you wear a mask but also it would be masking your heart because of your love for her, but her happiness is more important then her loving you so you are willing to mask your hearts true feelings to see her happiness. it's a great poem! it has a good deep feeling that you love someone so much that you just want them to be happy even if it means that you may be lonely.
"shattered mask" or "behind the mask lies a shattered heart"... "the mask that hides my rejection" "mask of rejection" "her laughing soul hides my broken soul" hey they aint good but i thought id help..... srry about ur g/f... i alomost lost mine.... i guess im lucky huh? btw 5/5 i gave u! uh IM me sometime at MzLonley2005
i think ur poem is true its how you feel but sometimes its hard to let go, like they say" the hardest part is leting go" but what they dont say is it only makes it easier to move on well keep writing the great poems