Uhmm it's alright. I guess I dont liek slang poems unless you pll them off. And in a few parts you diddint. But I can tell your an amazing writter, keep at it!
Love Always
Allison

thats really good! ive felt that way before too, n yea... good job! 5/5!

I enjoyed this one also, you really do have a poetic talent. Take care.

Ooh...I like this 1 too. My situation is like this. I don't wanna try anymore , I'm just gonna get hurt again. God! I hate men!...LoL , anyways , great poem , keep up the GREAT work