Comments : Here I am

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Awww hun that was so good, but I hope you aren't really gonna do that!!!

    *Mwah* *Huggkes*

    <3 Elizabeth

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel

    Love is a sad word when your lonley!!

  • 16 years ago

    by N.Lee

    This is one of the poems that showed alot of emotions...
    i liked it... good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great write Jennifer. I loved the repetition; that really kept me drawn into the poem. The deep emotions in this poem really showed through. The rhyming was great also.

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I enjoyed the repition, i think that it made the poem...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlee

    What an awesome poem this is one of my favs.. ur talented in many ways.. u go gurlie.

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    AWWWWWWWW thats truly sooooooo sweet love your poem (^_^) and love poem (^_^) truly great job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    I Hope you really arent going to do that...But this is written extremely well, I really enjoy reading all your work!!!

    Good Job Hun :]