I have to agree with the others, I think you did excellent with this poem. Good Job.

Libby

I don't think this is just about the horrors of war, but also the regretful human tedency to forget past horrors and move on to bigger and larger atrocities.

I liked the poem over all, but there was one piece I feelt didn't "blend in" with the rest, and kind of broke the flow.

"But as fall turns to winter; and years turn to decades and to centuries"

It's fine until you reach "and to centuries", just feels like it didn't fit in with the rest.

Best wishes,
Patrik

This was really good. the words fit together really nicely you have a way with desribing things well. this poem is so deep and has the drama that makes you think.
wonderful

Nice poem

Nice poem

Wow, such a great poem