UnFoRgIvAbLe

by **eMiLy**   Jul 13, 2005


Everything was prefect..it all felt so right
i had high hopes..a good future in my sight
i dreamed of us together..of you holding me tight
id tell you and you'd say one day baby we might
i had no idea of your intention
or your other girlfriend you forgot to mention
all those times you said i Love you baby
you didn't mean it...not once...not maybe
you've torn my heart out of my chest
now i lay myself to rest
i cant take the pain inside
its making me run its making me hide
thanks for destroying my life
have fun wit your new future wife
just like ill have fun with my new friend the knife
wen sum1 tells you I'm gone
don't frown don't cry just move on
its only fair...you killed me inside
don't be sad just let me die

**PLeAsE CoMmEnT AnD VoTe...It WuLd MeAn HeApz 2 Me If U GiVe Me TiPs 2 MaKe Ma PoEmS ImPrOvE**

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  • 18 years ago

    by ashtyn

    ummm i dont think u need to change anything in ur poem i love it the way it is and u shouldnt change it! i loved it!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    excellant but sad peom it reaally reallly really really gd keep it up.

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