its nice... i'll read ur other poems too... yes its sad 2 lose someone

alot of emotion showed just in quite a simple poem, it is beautiful!!!
i lvoe it keep up the good work!!!
luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

that was a good poem. its hard to lose someone. and when someone is gone it sux to know that you cant do a thing to bring them back.
michelle

wow, very emotional poem- i can see you put everything you have inside into this work! excellent! very sad tho

well written :( i wanna cry now....... 5/5
thanks for r/c on my poem

Thanks for the comments/ratings on my poem... good poem. well expressed. wonderful job! 5/5!

michelle

Yet another amazing poem

I can relate deeply.... maybe in a way you didn't meen me too... But i can... and i cried... and i loved it... and i want ot read it again... It was absolutly amazing.