i absolutely love it... !!

are you really sick?! Its awesome...but did you make it up, or is this real? It makes ME want to cry! Awesome poem, tho. 1,000/ 5!
Great job!
Love always,
Lyndsey

I wrote it for my friend... she's very sick.

oh my god, I haven't read a poem worth crying over in long time. This was amazing. I love it. I dont knwo if this is soemthing you wrote because you really were sick and if so. Im sorry. But wow, this is really good. Awsome job
Allison

What a sad poem....I sure hope your friend is ok.

I would suggest you do a spell check. And add ' where needed.

Excellent write though. I really enjoyed it. Putting a positive twist on such a tragic event seemed effortless in this piece. Nicely done! 5/5 :)

that was REALLY good! 5/5 definately

awww very sad! good rhyming. i liked it

wow great poem love it keep writing!!!

i would cry if you did that too yourself!!! please dont ever do that, great poem though, i really lovedit, almost cried myself!!!

wow what a tearfull poem!! very sad this one!!! good job though! i like it! hope your friend is ok

The last two poems I read were great and you seemed to have a better grasp on life well done keep up with this great work...

o SiS I almost cried.Awwww did you read dis to your mom.awww

This is excellent! It really is what people need to remember when a sick person dies...Great job again! 5/5!