Comments : I'm your doll

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Amazing poem, brilliant images put across incredibly well, perhaps I picked up a meaning that wasn't there, but I shall assume I am correct, Don't think that the person hasnt seen faults or mistakes, Dont think that this person hasn't seen the scars, dont think that they imagine what you are like, because this person probably loves you just as much with all your mistakes, this person accepts any bad things you have done, this person understands you more than perhaps you realize, this person may say you are perfect because to them you are, it doesnt mean they think you dont make mistakes, it doesn't mean they want to hide the scars, it means they love you, just as you are, with any mistakes or faults, even though in the past you have hurt them, perhaps they are not blinded by self hatred, they see you as a wonderful person, Like I do, I have seen all the bad and I love you, more than anything can possibly say, I love you, just as you are, with the scars and the tears, I love you and I wouldnt change you for the world.. sorry this is really long, Amazing poem, wonderful wording and intellectual vocabulary..

    Take care

    Love you
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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i like the poem, it's a great idea! wonderful job! strikes me as sd though because it's always sad seeing someone hiding behind a mask, hiding themself.

    ~PLP~lil slam~ always here to talk

  • 18 years ago

    by XKt_ShellyX

    Great poem, I understand what you mean and think you put across really well.
    Atleast you can see its not good to hide yourself. Dont let anyone make you feel like you need too.

    5/5
    kt x