oh my gosh, i loved that! it was so wonderful...and all that stuff you added to you son at the bottom was just so wise....your son is soooo lucky to have a dad like you, and your wife is really lucky too...keep that kind of mind when you raise your child, ok? i'm sure you'll be a great father...good luck, and congratulations!

thats awesome..sounds like ur gunna b a gr8 dad

*jaw drops* is there anything else i need to say...touched

xxxLoUxxx

Congradulations! I hope that you are proud of yourself. You are a good poem writer.

wow awesome poem. i loved it

I have'nt been on the site in a while but I recieved the automated email with your poem on it...and you know what I thought it was amazing, I d love to have a son or daughter of my own...but I guess it will happen when things are right........this poem shows love and adorement and everything else you feel for a child....its perfect...I could'nt have written a poem like this better myself.

You have real talent that would be envied by a lot of great writters out there. Keep writing as you'vve got a fan now.

Lisa

hey this is very sweet I really like it I hope you and your wife and son have a great life together enjoy it....you only live once

omgosh! i loved this poem. at first i thought it was gonna be about abortion but it turned out awesome! wow amazing job. defently 5/5

great poem and good luck mate you'll be a great dad hope i'll be a dad soon

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great poem i really liked it it was awesome 5/5

Truly amazing and inspirational, if all fathers (and fathers to be) were like you the world would be a better place. Best of luck with your son,
great poem

Sammi xxx

this poem is great i love it!!!!

AAAWWWW
I LOVED YOUR POEM, REALY LOVED IT
WOW
it's so powerfull
CONGRATULATIONS
you're gonna be such a great dad,
you son is gonna be so happy when he reads it when older!!
keep writting, your very talented
and i hope the best for you and your wife and you're son

take care, bye
...pili

That was amazing! So positive and bright. If it is true - congrats! I hope your son arrives safe and sound.

i love the technique you use when writing.
your very good at poetry, so keep at it.
plz read my poems and comment, i'm new here and i have never written poems before so plz cud u give me some advice or somwthing thanx emily.

i loved this poem i have a son of my own and it decribes evrything i've ever wanted him to know it was great keep it up

this is one of the best things i have ever read its beautiful. Those are the sort of things i want for my son your child will be really lucky :)

Your poem truley touched my heart and you have a wonderfulo talent,I hope that you enjoy your son and he becomes everything you want him to be.

Awsome poem!

Brilliant!