man this poem rocks man. i really like it. this is really awsome! keep up the fantastic work man.

thats a good poem you are going to be a exellent father i wish i had one

1 word... STUNNING

Truely beautiful, you will definitely make a great father. *adds you to favorites*

Hey, check out my poems sometime.

Again, very good work.

*~Bridgey~*

omg this is so sweet. love it!!<33

5/5

Hi Michael, just want to say what an excelent poem and congratulations too, i'm about to become an uncle any time now, now the same but still great. Have a great life with your son i'm sure he'll shine brightly.

i like ure poem its nice

Wow, that was absolutley wonderful.
Well done!!

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its...awesome.. your incredible..*wink..=D

It's a darn shame that the highest vote possible is a five...I thought it was an amazing poem, Really enjoyed reading it...Thanks for the good read!!!
20/5

woah. that was amazing. you sound like you are going to be the happiest father and have a son who is going to love you so much. great writing. my baby Raine died when he was just eight weeks old, and i am almost jealous of you. i hope you have the best life imagianable. Peace and Love, Haley

This is an excellent poem. Great job. Beautifully done.

This poem is just so heart warming...i love this dude...hope to see more poems like this..keep it up:D

I can relate to this poem b/c my sisters having a baby soon.Very good write.5/5

You truly captured a parent's in-depth perception of a child on the way. This poem is written with a high degree of intelligence and emotion. It's inspiring to read and really touches the heart. You have a real talent. Best of luck.

excellent.i hope your son comes out healthy and beatiful and brings happiness to your life.

thats the most beautyful poem ever i just became an aunt not the same i know but i love her just the way you describe hope everything is perfect good luck

good poem my sister is pregant!!

that was really good and it was sweet

great job man, I'm impressed