Comments : You Leave Your Mark

  • 18 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    I think we know who its about hun...

    You were the one that held my world
    For you knew me the best
    One moment was perfect; it’s just too bad,
    You left like all the rest

    I promise I will not cry for you
    Even as tears fill in my eyes
    In spirit you left so long ago
    But I was convinced by your cold lies

    :-(

    Talk to you later... xxx :'-(

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Its not about you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    ok *hugs* xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    God that was sooo beautiful and perfectly written, brought tears to my eyes...

    I promise I will not cry for you
    Even as tears fill in my eyes
    In spirit you left so long ago
    But I was convinced by your cold lies

    My fave part, something I can relate to!!!

    *Love sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    so many mind blowing lines. fantastic. loved the stanza

    You take with you, the pieces of me
    That broke that time before
    And now you are so high on you
    I find I’m on the floor

    as well as the last, and well, all of them. im still here if you needed me at all, just an e mail away
    luv lu -x-x-x-