Very good poem, Understandable, clever stanzas.. good work keep up the writing :D

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This was good. Your right, It's not one of your best, but I still like it alot! Xx

i understand that !!! lol i like the meaning n stuff... good job tryin 2 capture the emotions! 5/5

Good poem!! keep up the good writting

its cool,
kinda reminds me of "do the math"
but i appreciate it..
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Nice poem! I think I actually understood it :-p. But nice job (",)

~Krissy