thats really good. very emotional and i sort of relate it to my poem 'you said' but its really good!

Gr8 poem hun if u could r/c on my new poem called "This is My Last Goodbye" that would be gr8!!!!!!!*huggkes*<3 Elizabeth

i really liked your poem,i bet alot of gurls can relate to it.

Good poem!! 5/5 Very understandable/relatable.

Always here,
-Razor-

Hey i really like this poem, it is sweet and sad. u r a gr8 writer keep it up. if u hav time can you check out my poems? preferably my poem 'don't make my mistakes' and leave a comment? tnx n keep up the good work