Awesome hun...I can relate to this poem all too well!!!*HUGGKES* <3 Elizabeth

Wow, so short yet explains so much.
I really enjoyed it! It shows so much fear and most people have felt like this once or twice in there lives if not more!
You captured the atmosphere well done.

xx(this was short so Ill read another one kk)xx

Lol this is cool shrot so it can give loads of differnt meanings very good

I LIKE THIS ITS REAL GOOD

I LIKE THIS ITS REAL GOOD

Well i think it shoulda been longer! ^_^

Omg..
i like it :)
5/5

Lol. It's so short. I can't think of what to put in this comment. Make longer poems! I liked it, had a lot of description. I agree with everyone else though. SHOULD HAVE BEEN LONGER. Keep up the good work. And this comment is probably almost as long as the poem. Lol.

Its real and truth. nice wrk may u live long and write more and more take care.