Comments : Can't Believe

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    beautiful, i loved it!! i can relate very very well!! very very well written and loved every bit of it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    Wonderful poem. Very sad, i'm glad it "was all a dream." very well written and kind of scary, having someone close to you die.

    Take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Wow, Love the ending, thanks for the good read. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Good thing it was only a dream...very well done.

    xxx