OH MY GOD!! i love it!! jeeze why cant i write like that..grr lol GREAT JOB!! your such a good writer...5/5 lol keep it up you got talent!
*BECKY*

WELCOME TO CLUB BUDDY!! I'll be looking for ya...lol :)

I love this piece. It flowed so nicely. I LOVE the first 2 lines. The style of this poem is so unique.

Nicely done my friend!! :)

well, this was...different. but a cool different. I liked it. definitley original. and I love original. Keep up the good work.

Take Care,
Renee

This is great! 5/5 for you! Nice transition as well..Bad world to good I mean!

i loved it u write so well it waz transcendent times 100
WICKED AWESOME
~HazE

Chilling imagery, 5/5! write on!

This one was really good Andrew. I like your wording. :) You always bring such excitement into your poetry, even when its not meant to be there. I love that.

-Mwah, Jennifer.

''Scarlet Stars''

Those words just fit, not even sure why but they do. What i like about this poem is that it's not a set 4lines rhyming verse thingamagiggy. :)

I like that it's free. xxx