Comments : Oh Loving World(Oh Dying World)

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    OH MY GOD!! i love it!! jeeze why cant i write like that..grr lol GREAT JOB!! your such a good writer...5/5 lol keep it up you got talent!
    *BECKY*

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WELCOME TO CLUB BUDDY!! I'll be looking for ya...lol :)

    I love this piece. It flowed so nicely. I LOVE the first 2 lines. The style of this poem is so unique.

    Nicely done my friend!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    well, this was...different. but a cool different. I liked it. definitley original. and I love original. Keep up the good work.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This is great! 5/5 for you! Nice transition as well..Bad world to good I mean!

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    i loved it u write so well it waz transcendent times 100
    WICKED AWESOME
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by backporchpoet

    Chilling imagery, 5/5! write on!

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This one was really good Andrew. I like your wording. :) You always bring such excitement into your poetry, even when its not meant to be there. I love that.

    -Mwah, Jennifer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Avellana

    ''Scarlet Stars''

    Those words just fit, not even sure why but they do. What i like about this poem is that it's not a set 4lines rhyming verse thingamagiggy. :)

    I like that it's free. xxx