omg this is so goodddd but really really sad, it almost made me cry.again awesome poem.

This poem rally got to me, even though it wasn't real, you really got to the point and just simple but I loved it keep up the great work!!! Rose

dude you haev to be kidding me this is awesome i give it a 5 amanda!!! gez this was like the best ever omfg!!! it made my speachless~!

great poem but i don't get it... if he loved you and you two were together then he didn't have a reason to kill himself... so why did he commit suicide? well any way it's still a great poem!!!

hey that was awesome..amazing poem.i think that you shouldn't change anything about it..it is awesome..great job. i give it way more than a 5. great job. this poem is amazing....

wow..what a poem...it was soo sad and soo..scary..and soo..wonderfull...all at the same time. haha...you're a great writer.

Ana

whoa... that was a really good poem. when i read it, i was actually very shocked to find out it wasnt real... it was so detailed, everything in it seemed like it was real! i loved it! keep up the good work!
much love,
Jamie

It can't be any better....it was really nice.
I almost cried. You have great skillz. Keep it up
xoxo
Denise

hiii!
hey great poem, u me and u seriously have issues with our ex-s. this poem is like so deep, ur really talented with this kinda stuff!
great poem
Julie

OMG....WoW..... this was great. i really like it. keep it up

OMG....WoW..... this was great. i really like it. keep it up

OMG thats so sweet and so sad!! Gurl you don need ta change a thing its great da way it is!!! Your a great riter keep up the great work!!!!check out my poems sumtime
luv always
<3Linzee<3

this is a really great poem!! i like it alot..!!

This is one of the bestest poems i've ever heard!! I think you did a wicked job. You really know what to say and how to say it. I dont know what to say im speechless...I'm glad its not true. it almost made me cry. I give you a 10 out of 5..lol

Kaylee