Comments : My Mistake

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydie

    Well written, I just have to say I hate/loathe/despise the word moping...

    It shouldn't be in slang poems - In my opinion...

    Good topic to write about though... Keep it up...

    -Lyd

    P.S Thankyou for the comment on mine!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    umm...i changed it to whining, is that better?

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Very nice...not my fave, but good job. ;)

    xxx