Comments : Two lost chances

  • 17 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    you had a constant ryrme or flow until the last line...? what happened?

  • 17 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    Excellent poem, I thought it was very well written, my girlfriend and I liked each other for almost a year before we started going out. It drove us both insane. Take care, and thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by wendy

    Thank you for the comment on my poems and you write very well also i added you to my fav.

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Fantastic poem, hun... I love this... I hope that your two friends read this. Great job!!