you had a constant ryrme or flow until the last line...? what happened?

Excellent poem, I thought it was very well written, my girlfriend and I liked each other for almost a year before we started going out. It drove us both insane. Take care, and thanks for the comment

Thank you for the comment on my poems and you write very well also i added you to my fav.

Fantastic poem, hun... I love this... I hope that your two friends read this. Great job!!