Comments : Broken

  • 18 years ago

    by Mexxy

    Loves it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by XKt_ShellyX

    Wow - Thats a really beautiful sad poem honey.
    5/5 - as always!
    Hope your ok ma babsey.
    love you

  • 18 years ago

    by Greta Miller

    I like how it was different than the patterns usual boring poems follow! it really made me think alot! good job, check out my poems if you wanna!!hugs*
    greta

  • 18 years ago

    by Greta Miller

    I like how it was different than the patterns usual boring poems follow! it really made me think alot! good job, check out my poems if you wanna!!hugs*
    greta

  • 18 years ago

    by Treakle

    You are a fantastic poet, I hope one day you will see all the good things in your life and smile, i can tell you have great friends who will help you through these aweful things and when i read your recent suicide poem my heart broke, it made me cry, you have such a good heart and such emotion, i'm so glad you saved yourself.
    I'm here always Chloe

  • 18 years ago

    by Christopher Cole

    It was awesome i like how you mentioned glass throughout the poem