Comments : Waiting For Your return

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy

    It didnt rhyme, but they dont always need to. Very heartfelt. i hope he comes back soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by Unity

    i liked the poem, it was a great read :) keep up the work, im returning the favour as you have written a comment for myself , reading what you wrote to me, made me smile and actually believe there was still hope, although you may not know it, youve helped me in so many ways and i can not thank you enough!
    thank you very much for helping me with your very inspiring words :)
    keep up the great work and keep writing
    take care
    - Unity

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautifully sad, I hope this person returns to you...... wonderful write, keep up the great work.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    nice poem and keep it up thanks for your comment and thanks fro you feed back i be sure to take it.