Under

by aaron c s   Jul 17, 2005


Under the stars above
We make love
Under the ocean of blankets
Finally with you
Holding you closer than ever before
Feeling your heart in mine
I reach out and touch your face
I put you in my embrace

This one really sucks but I still wanna finish it so please give me some suggestions.

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  • 18 years ago

    by cant sleep

    i like it! its so passionate. i think you should really finish it, ill look for it later. i like how it is so far, the metaphors are so beautiful. i love ur word choice. whoever u wrote this for, is so lucky! wish it was me! dang! lol
    -nancy

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