I Liked The Message...It Had a Powerful Meaning...The Format You Used Made Me Want To Read More...Awesome Job On This Piece xoxo-Nikki-xoxo (5/5)

WOW!! this poem is so well written...you can tell that you really put your heart into it.
Keep writing...you are SO GOOD at it!!
5/5..definitly

much love,
chelle xox...check out and comment mine sometime if you would like

beautifully written! and has some nice messages as a bonus. keep up the good work and thanx for the comment on my poem!