wow. i hope i don't get sturck by lightning. very good though.

because they hate me

Sad and Powerful! A great, Original piece! Keep writing and stick that head up! I hope you meet light soon. Luv ya!
kt

great poem! very well written. keep it up!
crystal

-_- you just have to get into everything dont you?

Thats cool i like that its a good poem

Hey it's a really good piece! I thought the structure of the poem was great and the way you set it out. It shows how you are feeling clearly. You expressed yourself very well :)

That was really good girly keep it up...come check out sum of mine....much love xotaeyannaxo

That was really good. i loved it. you r a great writer keep up the work......huggs....missy

Wow this brought tears to mah eyes....it was so sad....so..i dunno what to say about it was just wonderful....great job...the feeling of the poem was so strong....5/5

God damn i lvoe this poem i can relate so mcuh i feel like i have nothing to live for but yet i am still here i will not take my own life but if i was to get murdered it would be an improvement on my life...awesome poem 5/5

I could really relate to your poem...it sounds alot like me...if you really feel that way I'm always here to lend an ear..from someone who understands...Keep your head up and keep up the good work you have a great talent.

I could really relate to your poem...it sounds alot like me...if you really feel that way I'm always here to lend an ear..from someone who understands...Keep your head up and keep up the good work you have a great talent.

Hey hun that was a great poem you wrote very emotional and clear. xoxo rach