Please People COMMENT

heyhey, thanks for commenting on my poem... i really liked yours...i can connect so much to it. I love the part where you say "We were close friends, with a different kind of connection.
I ran to you when I needed you the most.
You were my everything" cuz thats how it was for me. And don't worry I'm sure if you need him, just tell him and I,m sure he'll be there for you. Cuz if he was always there for you before probably now too, he cares about you! anyways good job!

The best kind of poems are poems with actual feeling. When you can FEEL the love or the pain or the confusion. Which you can feel in this poem... you are a great writer, and you should definately keep at it. Never forget who you are... and the talent you have. Great work, 5/5
Car

Thanks Guys for commenting my poems. It's been 6 months since I talked to him, thats a long time. I no for sure I have lost him for good. I see him sometimes, but he can't even give me the time of day to say Hey! But that's ok cuz I realized that I'm so much happier without him. Even though I still think about him, I'm ok.