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  • 18 years ago

    by Ava

    Well well, what another great one....Keep it up, and remem what i said!

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    I love alll urs peoms there sad but exellant.I love em Wow i cant stop reading them its amaxing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    great job keep up the good work.
    ~ItalianStallion~

  • 18 years ago

    by dArKgOtHiCgIrL

    thats really good! hope 2 see more soon

  • 18 years ago

    by Katelyn

    good job keep up the good work!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    I think you have great potential. You have skill for rhyming..you can only get better. This one was pretty good. It could have more depth and detail, but then again it's your writing. Keep it up, and be yourself...that's all anyone can ask of you.

    ~rolo