That's so sad unfortunately it happens so often! Very well written poem! You told a story of a commom problem that so many people overlook or they never know it's going on. Good job! Take Care! Brooke~

damn man! that was good! great job! keep it up! and take care. :)

Seriously your going on my favorites!! its like you can put into words what i feel!! i loved it!!! bye bye EJ

wow... amazing. i am jsut like that girl; except nobody sees me a perfect, but as a really good girl. they dont realize the pain inside. 5/5

WOw such a neat title, the perfect lie lol. Makes you really think....good job

That was a sad poem, i liked it, it flowed well :D

wow..beautifully written!! keep up the amazing work!
-xXx-

mwah. girl. every word i read, i fall inlove with. its all so beautiful.. put together in a twisted web of words, placed together to make a unique, sad, great story. mwah. love ya girl

Awsome poem...I bet alot of us can relate to it 5/5! Well done.

Much Love,
x0x*Kat*x0x

wow...i just love that...so tru..great work

this is really good...i relly really liked it...your an awsome writer there is no doubt about that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5/5

Wow, that was an awesome poem! That sounds a lot like me, except NOBODY thinks I'm perfect, in fact they think I'm far from perfect. Very good job. My computer won't work again , but I gave you a 5/5 in spirit
asian luv alwayz

Great job!! Very emotional!! Keep writing!! 5/5

Really good poem, It flowed Beautifully.

Rebecca.

that was very very sad but also very good 5/5
amazing job!

that was very very sad but also very good 5/5
amazing job!

Well written and nicely expressed. This is so true. Keep up the good work!

J

Nice poem! Good job. Really liked it.

i know exactly how you feel and i so agree

Sad poem, but I liked it. You did a good job of explaining things. Awesome job. 5/5!