oo...nice. I like it. Well written doll...*hugs* I hope you're alright. keep up the great work. <3 xoxoxo

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Wow, this has so much feeling in it, and so original. I love it. Keep up the great work, You have a wouderful talent an amazing way with words. Awsome!
Love Always, take Care
Allison

I really like it - as for a title erm
'To Dream...'
i dunno its a tough one

not bad keep up the good work

very creative and a good jobz

-Josiah

hey..this poem indeed is very cool....keep it up..izz a masterpiece....

adios

Very unique. The style is very different than anything I've ever read but I do like it.

I will say that an Untitled poem is a lazy poem. Normally I'll NEVER read poems that are untitled. To ME that's a sign that you didn't take it seriously....that it didn't mean that much to you. If you didn't take it seriously and it didn't mean anything to you then why should it to me...? Hope you understand what I'm saying. I read it because you left something to the affect of yes in the thread...lol Just a thought....Keep that in mind as I know many people within this site who feel the same way.

Anyhoo....I loved this. If flowed nice and sounded good without rhyme and I love that!

Nice write!!

Hi! this poem really has a nice flow I think it's really good of you how you writed this a lot of people cant ( including me ) i gave you a 5 to show you how much i appreciate it
Well done,
milou

Really beautiful! 5/5..keep it up!

plz comment on mine as well!

wow i like the structure of this poem very much! its something i've never read before. very nicely written and touching too.

if you want you can come check some of my poems whenever you pleae...