Comments : Gentle Kiss

  • 18 years ago

    by Clark Jacobs

    Very Nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Libby M

    words can truly hurt...and what can come out of our lips can either heal or wound... isn't that amazing? You did a great job .

    libby

  • 18 years ago

    by erely

    Truely to the heart of matters that are bad...very good writing this one and the others....Smiles ...555

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really enjoyed this, you obviously have much experience in these matters and it comes off very clearly in this piece. The rhyming was not needed here because I think it would have been effective without it, but because it rhymes it adds something extra to the poem. Nice work all round.

  • 18 years ago

    by PinkLaces

    Love it.
    I Understand Where You're Coming From - Well Done :)

    PinkLaces

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    I can relate nice job!