by Clark Jacobs
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Very Nice |
by Libby M
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words can truly hurt...and what can come out of our lips can either heal or wound... isn't that amazing? You did a great job . |
by erely
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Truely to the heart of matters that are bad...very good writing this one and the others....Smiles ...555 |
by Ariana
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I really enjoyed this, you obviously have much experience in these matters and it comes off very clearly in this piece. The rhyming was not needed here because I think it would have been effective without it, but because it rhymes it adds something extra to the poem. Nice work all round. |
by PinkLaces
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Love it. |
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I can relate nice job! |