Sinse many convince me to put my "practice poems," on the web, so I did...this is 1 of them...however, these poems are absolutly terrible and barley should have the name for potry. I have failed in this poem :(...

i liked it and well this is really not you rite cuz then ur profile would be lieing well i really liked it it was really good 5/5 and don't worry you will get a whole lot better

You haven't failed! No, you have not.

It shows how all through life terrible things can happen...but in the end, you should just live your life and see what comes out of it or what you can make of it...I think that's a possible good message at the end...not entirely sure the way the rest of the poem was...but good job. This wasn't as great as your first few submissions, a good poem nonetheless.

xxx

Pssh.. Babe, it's wonderful. I don't care what you say. It's not bad at all, and you DID NOT fail lol. I like it:) Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

~Jessica

Makes me really cry i love ur writings
i love u