thanx very much = )

Truly touching poem...really captures your lost love and yearning...
You must be a natural, because from that it doesn't seem like you're new at this.
Sorry your girlfriend split up with you...that can be rough...but that's great that writing made it so you could forget those thoughts... :)

xxx

thank you, that really does mean a lot. i've always been pretty good at english but never at expressing myself or anything, i think iv just matured in my use of language etc.. Thanks = )

a lot better than the last one.. its absolutely gr8.. its truly touching.. and very heartfelt.. gr8 work.. well written
keep it up
take care
nouna

thanx everyone