I really liked this 1 keep it up! Libby
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Bleed is like I'm bleeding...I think you mean bled...just a minor spelling mistake!! This is a really good poem again, and o m gosh...the end is so cute, "the both said their vows n cryed i do" i loved that...and I love the idea of bleeding mascara in a poem, it's so real and so dramatic...Great job again, 5/5, and never stop writing!
xoxo-Sierra Rae

Isn't bleeding mascara an atreyu song? for an overused title, it was really good : ) read some of my stuff if you get bored