this was very good

different but amazing

<3

This was an excellent poem. It was very rythmic as well, there were only two spots that I saw something that could be improved- the eigth line would sound better as 'Only now will you drop your knees to the floor' and the last line would sound better as 'But I am your master, the goddess unnamed.' other than that, it was basically flawless, excellent job, keep it up!

I wanted to give you a low score. But that would be un just. Great poem.

i love dark poems and you wrtie them well i love it great job!!

GreAt poem Awsomely written i LoVed it
~HazE

Great poem i loved it 5/5

Woa woa!! talk about dark...this poem was the shit! i think my fav stanza would be the one second to last 5/5

Yet another awsome one Keep up the great work!

Amazingly written..

In a word: Fantabulous. Suggestion for a title erm perhaps "I am"....or was "Nameless an intentional title?

[lostlaureate - come find me]

In a word: Fantabulous. Suggestion for a title erm perhaps "I am"....or was "Nameless an intentional title?

[lostlaureate - come find me]