Awesome job! really very lovely.. I hope she gives u another chance! Esp. since the poem was so great! anyways very well writtn keep it up! 5/5! u kan chek out some of my poems if u want Great job!

am speechless.. this is absolutely breath-taking.. i love it.. i love ur rhyme and ur deep words... the flow is gr8.. i adored ur 2nd stanza, especially the line 'has awaken my heart'.. reli gr8.. gave u a 5
keep it ups!
nouna