You Can't Save Me

by mandi   Jul 21, 2005


Yesterday i cried a puddle, a mix of tears and blood,
I whispered softly to the blade, as i watched that puddle flood,
Sensing myself start to cry, i slowly lift the blade,
I want no more of this thing that makes me fade.

Today I cried a river, alot of crimson tears,
I cut the blade deep through my skin, in hopes of not being here,
Feeling myself give in to this pain,
I feel it getting deeper, soon i'll reach the vein.

Tomorrow I will cry an ocean of blood and tears together,
And when you see me laying there, you'll think "i wish i could of saved her",
But no one could of saved me, because i never let them know,
The reason for all my pain, I never let show.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shyanne

    OMG! I really started crying holy crap! That is extremly touchin to me haha! Your SOOOO GREAT! keep up ur great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    i love it. it was so true. keep up the good work.

    Emma 5/5

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