Ok, this is suppost to be a non-dark poem. I tried so hard and this is all I get...naturally...this is a disaster. Naturally, its suppost to be about average days. I did this because I;m a witch and we stick to elements. (There is suppost to be 5 elements[ Spirit, Fire, Earth, Water and Wind] but I added some of my elements) But its all up to u. Tell me how u liked it.

hmmmm..interesting poem. i like it. youve used some really goos expressive language. very good indeed in my opinion. and for a fairly long poem its not boring.

In my opinion, you succeeded...doesn't seem dark to me...and it's very interesting how you fit in all those elements and some of your own...very unique and well done poem...I do like it.

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