Awesome poem. I liked it.

This is another well written poem. could hav been a little shorter though, but that's just me, i don't like to read big long poems lol. but yea well done 5/5

Hey, that was nice. I loved the ending, the almost innocent, longing question, and the scenery of a rainy, darkening night, it was all very nice!

Good Writing!
beth

Your poem is a bit confusins because you went from one subject to the other so quickly.

However I like the descriptions of this poem, and I am a fool for descriptions.

"Will my knight in shining armor ever come back,
To greet me with a name,
Or will the answer to my very question,
Seek to die within a burning flame,"

This is my favourite stanza.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

So pretty i definatly didn't get it the first time through but thats cause im dumb then i got it and it made sense and its wonderful i dont know why it has a 4.5 it should definatly have a 5 for sure this is great writing

I find it so hard to read your poems without crying! Theyre so amazing - I wish I could write like you . . . This poem expresses really great emotition through its words . .

Peace. [Sole]

Ohmygosh this is so sweet! i love how you have written it. you are one talented person. keep writing. id love to read some more! this poem flows really well and a good structure. i think youve just earned a spot on my favourites. just amazing!

That was really good, it wsas long and took me some time to read properly but once i had read it over, i really enjoyed it.
well done
xxxxxx

WOW! I absolutely loved this. I loved the way you were talking about a real date and the dream word at the same time, it was beautiful. The words you used were so fresh and not many people use such a wide vocabulary in their poetry, which made it so much more fun to read. Great work.

-Steph

Nice imagery in this one. Nice job.

Excellent job! You write with such a passion.

I liked the connection between realism and unreality here, you used it very well. The vocabulary was very clear, too. Neat work.