wow the flow was great on that poem!!
a great//sad story that makes ya wanna keep reading

well done ?!?

5//5

xXx*Cutie~Pie*xXx=Lisa x)

Wow.. this was amazing! it flowed wonderfully and all the phrases were linked and together and you got the story across flawlessly... keep it up

sammie

Wow thats other amazing work of yours and i love it.

her wrist were cut
her life was but
a mere flicker

I think thats my favorite part in it. Keep up the great work

Juls

Brilliant peice. really veryu well written, and a great flow

Oh, this was so good! Keep writing!