Very, very, nice!!!

This is a great poem. I can deff. relate to how you feel. I love how you expressed yourself...its awesome!*

I am commenting on my own poem. I need your help. Instead of "but our paths are about as predictable as the weather" I was thinking of putting "But your love I could not teather" wut do you all think? If you even read this

Good work! keep it up!

JJ

Hi i love ur poem its so nice