I'll remember what you said (long)

by ..::*Broken*   Jul 23, 2005


I'll remember that night,
i'll remember that day
i remember each word you said,
that took my breath away.
I never thought i would see,
that side you have to you.
I'll never know why you decided,
to do what you did do.

As you drew me closer,
we lay there on my bed.
I revealed my feelings to you,
so many tears were shed.
I told you i loved you
I explained the past two years.
I let you into all my secrets...
all my dreams and fears.

For a while you said no words
but i saw it in your eyes.
You knew exactly what went on,
you knew why i cried.
i got caught up in the moment
as we lay there in the night,
tears upon my pillow...
I told you i couldn't win my fight.
I told you,
I resorted to the knife.

U held your body next to mine,
we lay there and you stroked my face.
The water drops were rolling down,
I felt like a disgrace.
I told you i was stupid.
You told me i was wrong,
and that i should of told you sooner
that my feelings were so strong.

I remember that night,
i remember that day..
i remember the words you said,
that took my breath away.
Ur words ment the world to me
went straight to my heart.
These words made me know that,
we would never part.

"i really love you,i promise you i do.
I will never let you go,now i know what you went through.
If you need a sholder to cry on, i will always be here.
We'll be together forever, even if i am not near.
Promise me you'll never do again, the silly thing you did.
You held the knife now in your wrists, are the feelings that you hid.
I'll forever be by your side, through the sun and rain,
i can never love another, like i loved you again."

The tears rolling faster now,
they cover my face.
We lay there staying close together
We lay there in embrace.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    OMG I love it it has so much emotion and it just says a lot!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Your poem is awesome and I can totally relate. It really has strong feelings in it and I can tell that it was something important to you. Keep up the awesome work!!! *~*Kayla*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by DANI

    this is really good!! keep writin luv ya!! dani xxxx 5/5