Great poem,worded well!

Hey, nice poem, i like the repetition of the title, it reads well.
xxx cici xxx

Love it...excellenta!! haha omg the repetition just made it sound so awsome!! 5/5

Twisted and beautiful..

Yeah, I like this poem very much. I can actually mage someone on stage reading this with all the gestures one would make to such poem.

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Wow that was really long, fabulous poem though, geez im runnin outta things 2 say cuz eery one is good!
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This rawks...I like the way you structured this, a little bit too long but excellent stuff...effective repetition.

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Flows beautifully, magnificent illusion, great poem!

Flows beautifully, magnificent illusion, great poem!